Thursday, December 1, 2016

Elevator of Doom: Original Narrative Template

I press the button to call an elevator right before a large man joins me in my wait. He’s wearing a sharp business suit with black hair slicked back and multiple rings on his fingers. The elevator arrives and we silently enter. Before arriving on our floor, the lift stops to pick up another party consisting of a young man joining hands with a pretty woman and an elderly lady behind them.
“Chester!” the beautiful woman gasps as the elevator door closes behind them, blocking an escape. She addresses the tall man incredulously. “What are you doing here?”
“I could ask the same question to you, you poisonous bitch” Chester’s eyes narrow.
“What’s going on?” the man accompanying the woman asks.
Chester pulls a gun out of his suit pocket.
            “She’s my wife, you sack of shit.”

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